Dear Tania Gibson,
My name is Ella and I think it would be a fantastic idea to get an Inflatable World in town. An Inflatable World would get us more money, it would give everyone something to do and bring enjoyment to all ages and it would also teach people new skills.
I think building an Inflatable World would be a good idea because it could make a lot of money. On the weekends when kids are bored, they could spend time with their friends at Inflatable World. It would also be good for birthdays and fundraisers.
If we had an Inflatable World lots of people would be able to enjoy and spend time with their friends and family. Any age would be suitable as long as there are safe areas for children and toddlers.
An Inflatable World would also be good for teaching useful skills such as Jumping higher, dodging, etc. Schools and classes could go for a day out at Inflatable World and have fun, learn new skills, and do challenges.
To conclude my letter, I think an Inflatable World in town would be a good idea because it would make a lot of money, teach people new skills and bring enjoyment to all ages. I hope that you consider my letter and put it into mind.
Yours sincerely, Ella
For the past 2 weeks during writing, We have been focusing on persuading our readers. First, we had to choose a topic that we wanted, I chose to write to the mayor Tania Gibson about building an Inflatable world in Greymouth. We weren't really writing the letter and sending it to them, this task was just for learning purposes. I enjoyed this task because it didn't take me long, it took me about 3-4 days.
Hello Ella H, Uinita Here from Glenbrae School. I love this idea on Building/Making an Inflatable world. I'm sure you would gain a considerable amount of money.
ReplyDeleteOne Question, If this place was a real place, what materials would you use to make this stable for there could be a hole which would deflate the inflatable world.
Anyways Great Work!
Uinita