This Poem is something i am proud of this year because i like the colour Orange, This is the best poem i have written this year because not all poems have to rhyme they just need to stand out.
How are you doing during this lock down at home? I hope there are lots of fun things happening at your house! This is a wonderful poem that you have written. Orange is such a fun colour. I like it too, that why I picked it for one of the colours in Nga Manawa. I look forward to reading more of your work over the next few weeks while you are working from home!
Kia ora, You have thought carefully about what karaka means to you and used effective language in your poem. Did you know there is a native tree called karaka which has orange berries? I like wearing my clothes as its such a bright fun colour.
Talofa lava this is Tina and Viena from Edmund hillary school we looked at your karaka poem and it was great and we like to say that keep up the good work and work hard everytime and we hope you comment on our blog! https://edhillselesitinat.blogspot.com/ and https://edhillvienat.blogspot.com/
nice poem. good job
ReplyDeleteI love this poem Ella! Orange is one of my favourite colours. So bright and refreshing!
ReplyDeleteI look forward to reading more of your writing this year.
Hi Ella
ReplyDeleteHow are you doing during this lock down at home? I hope there are lots of fun things happening at your house!
This is a wonderful poem that you have written. Orange is such a fun colour. I like it too, that why I picked it for one of the colours in Nga Manawa.
I look forward to reading more of your work over the next few weeks while you are working from home!
Talk again soon
Mrs Costello :)
Kia ora, You have thought carefully about what karaka means to you and used effective language in your poem. Did you know there is a native tree called karaka which has orange berries? I like wearing my clothes as its such a bright fun colour.
ReplyDeleteTalofa lava this is Tina and Viena from Edmund hillary school we looked at your karaka poem and it was great and we like to say that keep up the good work and work hard everytime and we hope you comment on our blog!
ReplyDeletehttps://edhillselesitinat.blogspot.com/ and https://edhillvienat.blogspot.com/